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THE ART CRIMES: Lovesexy
THE ART CRIMES: Lovesexy
* A story by Beau Cyphre - with an illustration by ReEjKa *
This prayer is dedicated 2 Réka and Zorán. Thanks for having me!
"2night we make love with only words
Girls first, girls first..."
Prince, Lovesexy
This night had been a long night, and after I had sex with my love and my girlfriend, I thought about some of the things I reflected with your shining star Zorán in our chat yesterday. He's your sun, and you are the moon, and there's nothing that'll ever come between you. But nevertheless we all decided to get in this surreal ménage à trois, to dive deep into the dark to find that re
With this accomplishment, people may have a higher standard for the rest of the poem. I will admit that there was a climax within the line "A mighty heart's always in love" that complicates in what i perceive as the poem's entire meaning.
Never the less, this poem is well constructed and has good word choice.
Good job.
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