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This Heart Of Mine

* An escalation by Beau Cyphre *


In hell I found there was a way
To eat the flesh eternally
Of virgins with a smile so bright
The sun's ashamed on her high ride
When darkness falls this feeling grows
A mighty heart's always in love
So take away this heart of mine
That in the end the dark will shine.
"SOME OF THE BEST THINGS EMANATE FROM SOUND...

A SECRET
A VOW
A UNIVERSE"

Words by Prince


This Heart Of Mine is inspired by the song Scarlet Pussy by Prince.

The secrets are written in Oz. They're put down on paper instantly, without reflecting or reworking them.



Posted before in :iconmybookofdreams:



Beau Cyphre / Art & Photography



Love is a drug, I realize that now, and there's no way out of my misery: I have to do what you want me to do, and you don't need to tell. This is automatic, and so I push you against the wall and spread your legs with one single move. We're sealed in a kiss, but I feel out of my body and seem to be a complete stranger now: A stranger's body possessed by my demon making love to you really old school, and this body fucks you like an animal. This body's mine, this body's me, and this body's also the sun, and I feel your reflecting heat in the same way he does, and finally so close to my orgasm I understand what's meant by the holy and the secret divine things, and our ménage à trois becomes trinity. Lust U always and say a prayer...

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THE ART CRIMES: Lovesexy
THE ART CRIMES: Lovesexy

* A story by Beau Cyphre - with an illustration by ReEjKa *

This prayer is dedicated 2 Réka and Zorán. Thanks for having me!

"2night we make love with only words
Girls first, girls first..."

Prince, Lovesexy

This night had been a long night, and after I had sex with my love and my girlfriend, I thought about some of the things I reflected with your shining star Zorán in our chat yesterday. He's your sun, and you are the moon, and there's nothing that'll ever come between you. But nevertheless we all decided to get in this surreal ménage à trois, to dive deep into the dark to find that re



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I have written poems similar to this in the notion of the heart and how it has felt through abrupt new found pleasure and misery, so with that being said i, right off the bat understand what you are trying to accomplish. The way you set the atmosphere, the visionary structure you set within the first two lines of this was a great idea. Capturing the eye, relating a feeling to a powerful place; Hell. Makes this piece relative to anyone who reads it.

With this accomplishment, people may have a higher standard for the rest of the poem. I will admit that there was a climax within the line "A mighty heart's always in love" that complicates in what i perceive as the poem's entire meaning.

Never the less, this poem is well constructed and has good word choice.

Good job. :)
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Elleka Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010  Student Photographer
dieses Gedicht ist wunderschön, und vollkommen,wie du es in "eternaty" schon gesagt hast.Ich denke es bedeutet für jeden etwas anderes, aber im Grunde wissen wir alle, oder wissen nichts, wir können nur vermuten, was dich dazu verleitet hat, es zu schreiben.
Und das ist das Spanende daran, zu erraten, was dainter steckt und es doch nie zu wissen...
xoxo
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BeauCyphre Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2010  Professional Writer
Ich weiß selbst nicht so viel darüber. Ich weiß, dass es sich beim Schreiben richtig angefühlt hat, und ich weiß (so verrückt das jetzt auch klingt), dass es wahr ist. Danke für dein Feedback! :glomp:
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einfachnurich Featured By Owner May 31, 2010
Es ist wunderschön, Bo, und ich kann wieder nur staunen.
Vielleicht ist das, was ich jetzt nach dem Lesen fühle, genau das, was du spürst durch die Musik von Prince.
Da ist Bewunderung mit drin, kindliches Staunen u das Nicht-Begreifens des Erwachsenen. Wie kann sowas Geniales den Gedanken eines einfachen Menschen entspringen?
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Corazon777 Featured By Owner May 31, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Probably this is the best piece of poetry an artist has ever written here on deviantART, but the best are always the lonesome 'cause nobody's able to understand their genius. There's no chance for us to go as deep as you're going, and digging deep you're flying so high that your words make us feel heaven - just for a second. And this second shines so brightly that it reminds us of eternity. Godlike, seriously. :heart: :heart: :heart:
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NishitokyoGirl Featured By Owner May 30, 2010  Student Writer
This is genius! :heart:

xxx
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